Girl Story!

Draft 1
Teddy smith
I sat in my room looking in the mirrior. My mom always said I was pretty with golden blonde curls she said I was her ray of sunshine.

Right now my mom was downstairs having another of her parties. For the past 11 years I was never aloud to them. They always had alcohol and strangers. I could feel the party benign me the floors vibrated from the noise. Suddenly the booming music turned to frantic screams. I ran out into the hallway And saw orange and yellow flames creeping up the stairs. I ran for the phone dialed 911, Someone picked up.
"FIRE!" I screamed. I dropped the phone and franticaly looked for an escape.

There was one window at the end of the hall it looked to the forest behind my house. I tried lulling it open; no sucsess. I yanked at the lock it wouldn't budge. I picked up the table that the phone was on. I broke the window and jumped. I was falling through the cold bitter night when I plunged into the icy cold water of the creek. I pushed to the top the water filling my lunges. I broke the surface to see my house bursting wiu flames. There was and explosion from inside and beams fell lighting the trees around me on fire.

As a flaming beam fell by i ducked under the water. It was boiling. I tried to kick m legs but he dumb dress wasnt giving me enough space! I twirled around to see something falling and like I bumped a light switch, there was total darkness.